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Called it, Alej is only there just to tell Mora how she’s the best person and character in the entire universe.

I’m not seeing one you’re talking about. How does her confessing to the fact that she’s in a relationship translate to her worshipping the ground that Mora walks on? The only bit of ass-kissing in this entire page is Alej saying that she took More’s advice.

She’s thanking Mora for “giving her insight into her feelings for her” while at the same time pointing out Mora’s unbelievable deductive skills, like, seriously, Mora is pretty much saying she knows exactly what happened word for word between Alej and Toots just by looking at her friend’s face, like, holy shit, not even Dr. House was this good… okay, he was, but it’s still hard to believe Mora is at this same level xD

Anyway, long story short, this is yet another page to put Mora on the pedestal once again, fulfilling Deus Ex Machina’s prophecy, of Mora never facing conflict in her life, like, ever.

I know, right? Now they’re actively trying to change how the comic actually went for the sake of making Mora seem more amazing. And Alej’s tits don’t even look any different, how the flying shit can Mora determine anything of the sort?

Dude… that was just a joke about Mora being able to tell they had sex. Or at least Tootsie milked her.

Im not against Mora having some character challenges but this scene is harmless. Chill.

Like I said, maybe I’m jumping into conclusions, let’s see why Alej is actually there, I mean, I’m pretty sure it’s some SERIOUS business, right? And not just some random banter that happens to lead up to more praising of Mora, right?

I think everyone saw how Tootsie felt for Alej, Mora was just the only one to tell her. And didn’t seem like she analyzed everything, she saw her friend with an ‘I just had sex face’ and put 2 and 2 together about her and tootsie. As for the bra comment, probably just playful ribbing between friends that happen to be cows. Someone says something embarrassing like that even if it did or didn’t happen your first reaction will be embarrassment and something along the lines of ‘What!?’ instead of outright denial. Comes off less Sherlock Holmes and more just one friend messing with another.

Wow, why am I not surprised, Alej and Tootsie are together for less than a week and they’ve already had sex. Of course, cause that’s a major overarching theme of this comic.

To be fair, they’ve known each other for quite a while, so it’s not exactly a new person to them. That’s like, the only credit I can give this comic, but on the other hand totally get what you’re saying, look at what Mora did with Miles just because she actually wanted to fuck Minos.

I really …REALLY like the hair in here, both hair styles are just so alive and wonderful.

buuuut

She totally saw through you patches, ..because we needed to make Mora look amazing SOME how, so we basically just did a lazy story version of MetaGaming.

Also .. once again.. boobs don’t work that way, please give us actual character development and not just expanding their boobs by several cups every time you get horny Chalo.

Also the .. the milk joke, it was dumb..really fucken dumb and it was another reason to focus on their boobs, because those are what you really want us to focus on instead of anything else.

Cow Primes’ boobs DO work that way, actually.

yeah, they just expand on everyone and hips blow up and get massive too? I mean some how Ambar can take photos of people all FBI/NSA style of them having sex or shit and not get in trouble for violating basic privacy rights so I’m just gonna chalk this up to more dumb immature ideas.

No, I mean it’s been expressly stated that cow Primes specifically have constant milk production.

Again, just someone who doesn’t know biology, and doesn’t realize that the only reason milk cows constantly give milk is because we are constantly milking them, If they stopped being milked, they would stop giving it. Same with humans, same with any other mammal.

Umm… nope, dude, in the case of cows, they have to be constantly keep getting pregnant in order to produce milk for the next few months, once they run dry, they have to get preggers again (even Harvest Moon games are very specific on this), in humans, I think females can keep producing milk after birth only if they continue breastfeeding their offspring, I think the key element here is breastfeeding, maybe if cows kept feeding their own after birth, instead of getting their milk sucked mechanically, they’d keep producing milk, anyway, one thing is for sure, most female mammals have to give birth first before they start producing milk, and neither of these two cows have been pregnant, as far as I know.

Being that it speaks of someone who knows nothing of biology, has not researched the animals they are based on, and shows just an excuse for the artist to keep making them their own personal fap material instead of what would make it a good story or not? No, but it is not a small enough thing to simply let go.

Also if Mora’s boobs look like that, at what ever age she’s suppose to be, she’s aged horribly or milk is the great deformer of cow boobs.

why such aweful hate of the comic. seriously. just read the comic and stop being so over critical about it. if you dont like it stop reading, don’t come crying in the comments section spouting crap about why you hate this character or “make better story progression and character development” Chalo has done a fine job doing what he does. He reads these too and the more hate crap you put into the comments the less and less the guy is going to want to wright.

Are you honestly telling people, that they need to lower their standards and just accept things as they are? The ‘hate’ on this comic is justified fully in the bad writing, the awful mary sue horse crap and the blatant fact that they have teased,ignored,pissed off fans all the while trying to justify it with more and more fan service instead of actually getting better. Chalo could make a hell of a lot more on Patreon if he actually made the comic good instead of a Mary Sue and Self Insert Stu mess that it was that can’t even get its own back story straight, characters to no be two faced, or bring up HUGE PLOT POINTS and then totally forget about them.

And actually, this is one more reason why people think furry art and stories are nothing but sex fantasies, I mean, we could have more furry animated movies out there, video games, and official comic books, but instead, because these guys idea of “better characters” and “goo story writing” is to just draw “bigger boobs” is why furry fandom is considered just a bunch of immature sexual deviants, but yeah, let’s completely ignore the problem and laugh away at grade school-level sex jokes!

estoy disfrutando de esto mientras hay un caos en las calles… espero que los terremotos terminen pronto.

Espero que estés bromeando en ambos casos, pero de ser verdad lo de los terremotos, te deseo suerte 😉

10 dias despues, pero porque no… estoy bien, hubo un lo que se dice enjambre de terremotos (estoy en el pais de donde viene chalo btw), ocacionalmente hay alguno que otro, pero se han calmado, los medios de comunicacion aseguran que no es el volcan que esta cerca… asi que se pudo disfrutar del fin de semana largo comodamente… gracias 😉

Me alegro por ti, por suerte, yo estoy en una zona donde nunca ha habido terremotos, pero cuando pasan magnitudes como la de Haiti en el 2010 o Mexico en 1985, si son cosas bastante preocupantes, pero de nuevo, me alegra que estés bien, hermano latino 🙂

Ok, instead of going after certain people (Considering I made an ass of myself on the previous page) I’m gonna say this as a general term for anyone complaining in the comments. If you’re not gonna offer ways for the comic to improve (And that means suggesting something beyond a hard reboot) then shut up and go read something else, because if you don’t offer ways to improve, it becomes clear you’re just coming here to shit on the comic.

Man, I honestly can’t tell you how thankful I am for your opinion! I mean really, I’m all up for people stating their opinions and analyses about why certain things are good or bad, but I can’t stand it when they don’t even at least TRY to give us any form of constructive criticism or progressive feedback. And by that, I mean giving any sort of insight or ideas as to how Chalo himself can make the story better, and how he could make the characters more “alive”, relatable, and identifiable, just to name a few things that people seem to have an issue with.

If you’re just going to be another one of those comments that hates, yet criticizes why the comic is bad WITHOUT giving any form of advice or ideas that could prove to be a great contribution to Las Lindas and benefit it’s structure, then you’re just shit-talking the comic and nothing more! Chalo COULD read your comment(s) and understand why you dislike, or even outright hate his comic, but you are not giving him any kind of advice whatsoever as to how he could actually improve his comic.

Look, here’s what I think. Is Las Lindas a good comic? In my own honest opinion, I believe Las Lindas may not be good per say, in fact, I would rather call it an ok/50-50 kind of comic. But is it the “worst webcomic ever written”? Of fucking course not! I personally absolutely enjoy Las Lindas despite how much hate it gets (pretty unfair hate too if you ask me). And while I can comprehend, and thoroughly agree with most people as to why they dislike or hate this comic, I find it really unfair when people call out Chalo and Las Lindas on their bullshit, and they keep complaining about how both Chalo and his comics “suck”, when they didn’t even give him any sort of advice on how to improve!

For those of you who dislike or hate this comic, but at least give beneficial feedback and critisism, thank you. You may not like Las Lindas, but at least you’re trying to help Chalo improve, and I’m certain that even if it would be a slow progression, Chalo may very likely take your advice into consideration, and implement it in the future. If not then, oh well.

Also, I’d like to personally apologize if I may have come off as rude, insulting, or otherwise. I simply felt pity for the poor man who gave us this comic. I mean, despite how flawed this comic is, I still find things within it that keeps drawing me in to read the rest of it. Hell, I plan on re-reading it soon just because I love it so much despite how I would rate it as an ok comic. If this is how I felt towards Las Lindas, then surely Chalo must be doing SOME things right.

In any case, that was just my opinion. and once more, I can’t stress this enough when I say that I never meant to come off as rude, insulting, or otherwise at all in this opinion piece. Please forgive me if I happened to have upset any of you in any way.

To Chalo, Dakota Miyamoto, and the rest of the people who may read this comment, thank you for taking the time to read this.

Have a good one, and as always, remember to stay frosty!

(I’m not sure if this message will be displayed twice, because for some reason I posted this message once, and immediately, it got removed under the grounds of being spam even though this was literally my first ever comment on this website. So if you see this message twice, I apologize greatly!)

Man, I honestly can’t tell you how thankful I am for your opinion! I mean really, I’m all up for people stating their opinions and analyses about why certain things are good or bad, but I can’t stand it when they don’t even at least TRY to give us any form of constructive criticism or progressive feedback. And by that, I mean giving any sort of insight or ideas as to how Chalo himself can make the story better, and how he could make the characters more “alive”, relatable, and identifiable, just to name a few things that people seem to have an issue with.

If you’re just going to be another one of those comments that hates, yet criticizes why the comic is bad WITHOUT giving any form of advice or ideas that could prove to be a great contribution to Las Lindas and benefit it’s structure, then you’re just shit-talking the comic and nothing more! Chalo COULD read your comment(s) and understand why you dislike, or even outright hate his comic, but you are not giving him any kind of advice whatsoever as to how he could actually improve his comic.

Look, here’s what I think. Is Las Lindas a good comic? In my own honest opinion, I believe Las Lindas may not be good per say, in fact, I would rather call it an ok/50-50 kind of comic. But is it the “worst webcomic ever written”? Of fucking course not! I personally happily enjoy Las Lindas despite how much hate it gets (pretty unfair hate too if you ask me). And while I can comprehend, and thoroughly agree with most people as to why they dislike or hate this comic, I find it really unfair when people call out Chalo and Las Lindas on their bullshit, and they keep complaining about how both Chalo and his comics “suck”, when they didn’t even give him any sort of advice on how to improve!

For those of you who dislike or hate this comic, but at least give beneficial feedback and critisism, thank you. You may not like Las Lindas, but at least you’re trying to help Chalo improve, and I’m certain that even if it would be a slow progression, Chalo may very likely take your advice into consideration, and implement it in the future. If not then, oh well.

Also, I’d like to personally apologize if I may have come off as rude, insulting, or otherwise. I simply felt pity for the poor man who gave us this comic. I mean, despite how flawed this story is, I still find things within this comic that keep drawing me in to read the rest of it. Hell, I plan on re-reading it soon just because I love it so much despite how I would rate it as an ok comic. If this is how I felt towards Las Lindas, then surely Chalo must be doing SOME things right.

In any case, that was just my opinion. and once more I can’t stress this enough when I say that I never meant to come off as rude, insulting, or otherwise at all in this opinion piece.

To Chalo, Dakota Miyamoto, and the rest of the people who may read this comment, thank you for taking the time to read this.

Have a good one, and as always, remember to stay frosty!

Well, congrats, you’ve made an ass of yourself again, because we’ve been making suggestions ever since comments were re-enabled, like Joshua says, you want us to list all of our suggestions for you in EVERY page just for your amusement? And again, what is Chalo and co. literally getting paid for if you want us to do their job for them, despite them having OVER A DECADE of experience and having NOTHING to show for it except bigger breasts? I’m sorry, dude, but you win once again the “Braindead Fanboy of The Week” award.

I request that you tone it down a bit Gio, I already back lashed at them and they said they feel foolish, no reason to do it again as they are not being an aggressive shit any more. My question was simple and honest. Do they want them all at once? or one every page.

SCREW YOU, RICK, I’LL PURGE YOU TOO!

j/k, but this guy is just… like, he recognized being an ass, then he goes asking for the very SAME thing he’s been schooled being an ass for, like, geez, you can’t blame me for losing my patience with someone who doesn’t learn from their ADMITTED mistakes, anyway, ‘kay, I’ll tone it down, he doesn’t seem to be willing to argue anyways and just complain about the same stuff in each page.

Gio, the comment was never directed at you or anyone in particular. But based on what I have seen, there are people who come here quite literally just to take a figurative shit on the comic. So I’m merely making a request that if you’re going to criticize then also offer ways for the author to improve. Preferably while remaining polite as criticism is better received when it’s given politely

Oooh, politely, you mean? Like that comment when you told Joshua to “shut the fuck up”? Anyway, not trying to defend my friend here (since he can do that very well by himself), just found it ironic that you’re the one asking for politeness here, anyway, again, read the previous pages, we’ve been giving our critique without resorting “this comic should get cancer” or stuff like that, and when there’s things to be praised, we praise them as well, like that time when the page between Rachael and Miles finished beautifully with them becoming reluctant friends, just to be ruined on the next when they instantly became a couple.

Either way, I understand if you’re too busy to go back some pages to fish among hundreds of comments (I mean, I wouldn’t do it, personally), but I’d suggest not to ask for stuff that you don’t know if it’s already there, suggested by more than a few people, else, you’ll fail on your resolution of not looking like the ass you are, just sayin’.

Also, a couple pages ago, I resigned into this comic ever getting better, because it doesn’t, when it takes one step forward, it makes a back flip back and lands on its head, so I’m really not planning on investing on substantial feedback, if I know it’s gonna fall into deaf ears, I’d rather just hang in the comments section (as long as it lasts), and have fun with the people commenting on it, because that’s considerably more entertaining than this comic itself.

The hypocrisy is not lost on me, I was tired and cranky from a very aggravating shift at work. I apologize to Joshua about that. But seriously dude, if you’ve resigned yourself to this comic ever getting better, then I ask you this: Why do you keep coming back?

I got to use a hate boner come back, I regret nothing. Also admittedly, half the fun comes from seeing the ways people try to defend this and it is a bit fun to stur up chaos in the comments and often we actually change peoples minds when they see all teh faults of the comic laid out in the open before them.

I Ask again, do you want the suggestions all at once? or one at a page?

Either/or. Also check out a youtube channel called Webcomic Relief. It’s a show for reviewing webcomics. And the host did a 9-part review of it… He did not have a lot of nice things to say. Of course while I like this comic and he didn’t, I can see where he’s coming from. I never said the faults didn’t exist, I just don’t really know enough about story writing to make suggestions

What part of “I’d rather just hang in the comments section (as long as it lasts), and have fun with the people commenting on it, because that’s considerably more entertaining than this comic itself.” you didn’t understand? I mean, does it need to be any more clear? And I don’t mean just being here to bully people, we actually have some fun banter with Joshua, Al, others and myself, heck, sometimes we even disagree with one another but even then we manage to come to a neutral agreement.

Also, why do you keep asking the same questions after someone’s already answered to you? I mean, no offense, but it seems you have a serious problem understanding what people tell you, dude, I mean, at least you can say that the answer doesn’t satisfy you, to which I would say “tough titties, man”.

“if you give a mouse a cookies it will ask for a glass of milk”
i loved that book

How the hell do Primes even know what this book is? I mean this is a “Second earth” where they are all speaking ‘Prime” and not any form of earth language and is thousands of years in the future? I mean.. if you make a world that is so far separated from Earth.. you don’t get to make earth refs like that any more in stories that you even want to pretend are consistent.

200 years, actually, and apparently literally the only difference when Earth was reformed as Neo Earth was the addition of a new continent, it’s basically like time was turned back but at the same time reality was altered. But hey, good job pointing out yet another reason why their claims of “They’re all speaking a mystical alien furry language we can’t hope to understand and they don’t know a word of any human language!” fall apart with the slightest bit of closer observation. XD

THIS… is actually ONE thing I wouldn’t put past Mora being able to do.
The whole “I know you’ve just screwed” part,
I mean considering what a collossal slut she is, she’d likely be able to tell if somebody’s just done it. =P

(especially after the latest Ask High Prime page)

im cofused by what she means that she is fitting her bras better. As a titty owner, that makes no sense to me

Ok, so get this, Being that this person knows nothing about biology, Animal or other wise, Prime Cows constantly produce Milk, preggers or not in their breasts. So Mora is implying that she let the mouse suck her down some .. cause.. you know.. nursing is totally the same as being sexually attracted to someone or some crap (Sarc).

Yeah.. welcome to the “Logic” of this comic.

i was wondering if I was thinking the right thing but I was like…titties don’t work like that? Oh well, I guess they do here.

Just look at how Mora is drawn with her grandma boobs, Seriously.. if her boobs look like that, she aged poorly.

Nothing works how it should, from character interaction to ,story progression’ to anatomy. There’s a reason Chalo rarely breaks 600 bucks a page on his patreon while others rake in thousands.

Well, and that reason is actually not bringing ANYTHING new to the table, like, the best thing people can get out of this is mild amusement (if their expectations are sufficiently low), but really, it has nothing that has never seen before, or that a 6th-grader couldn’t think of, like seriously, there’s NOTHING new nor original about this comic, characters are generic AF and constantly switching personalities, they are also heavily uninspiring and not memorable, potentially interesting plot points get solved via plot convenience of just plain discarded, art gets more ridiculous with the ever changing body proportions, little lore ever gets explained, and when it does, it conflicts with character’s actions or just makes no goddamn sense.

Like really, is there ANYTHING special about this comic? It’s a genuine question I’m pondering myself.

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